samedi 30 juin 2007

BRÛLE CIERGE


dans neuf mois, si tout va bien
On trouvera ici un poème nouveau-né

un petit roi hurlant

::: ::: :::

[Image: Brûle cierge par reading_is_dangerous]

8 commentaires:

  1. Amazing piece of art work!

    I've never seen anything like it
    before in any of your works
    The contrast between the bloodred
    in the middle and the silvery taupe
    in the background, the whole
    ensemble resembling a fertilized
    ovum (reinforced by references
    to the 9-month gestation period)

    It is amazing how you keep
    on re-inventing yourself
    forward, always forward,
    very progressive
    (yet making subtle references
    once in a while to past themes,
    which is good: bridging the
    present and the past, to direct
    clearly the onward journey)

    A poem-newborn
    A small howling king
    In nine months

    We are all looking forward to it
    Your breed needs to multiply
    (metaphorically-speaking
    of course)

    ~Tau

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  2. Burn
    Born

    Burn-Candle
    Born-Candle Red
    A Candle that borns
    little howling kings
    in nine months inside
    this sphere where
    dwells a transparent
    maiden in this taupe-
    cushioned interior
    that glows with
    ether light

    in nine months
    (if all goes well)
    a little howling king
    coming

    should the world be happy
    or sad?

    ~E.

    P.S. I like the contrast
    between the bloodRed Born-Candle
    and the Taupe background

    Striking, striking, striking
    contrast!!!!!!!!!

    (my apologies for errors
    in spelling; me, a bit dyslexic
    just like Magnus)

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  3. Belle évocation du pouvoir nouveau-né.

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  4. and what a thing it will be
    to hold it in the arms
    the squirming howling poem
    the king new born
    to look into its sky eyes
    to tickle it till it smiles
    and gurgles
    Then flows
    mingling with the milky way


    love,
    vinita

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  5. /will the world be happy or sad?/

    the evil world will be sad
    for here comes a king capable
    of moral anger that surpasses
    the strength and intensity
    of any natural calamity

    ~E.

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  6. Et le futur devient simple...
    ou (v)indicatif ?

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  7. Oh, the little howling king's
    birthday is April 1st (or anywhere near that date)?

    advanced greetings, then
    to the li'l one!

    ~E.

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